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sure!

As an old dj mangoo fan as this reminds me of (the synth), maybe you don't know what I'm talking about.
The song is overall good! great sounds. But I was thinking, if it is a bit slow? I don't know really. It's hard to know, if it really could work in a faster bpm? And I wouldn't want you to rewrite the whole song for that, sort of. Yeah, this is just me thinking as I'm writing, lol!

Do your thing, the song is sounding pretty darn good.

JakobePaulobe responds:

You're right. It is a little slow. I'm raising the BPM by 10, but anymore then that, and it doesn't sound right.

this sound....

I just love the sound. And I just happen to love melodic stuff. Wtf is this? chilling atmospheric sound.

Cirrow responds:

I like melodic stuff too!

It's a toxis biohazard preset, "PercPiano" with the wavelengths changed to Sine and "Organ".

Thanks for the review!

Awesome composition

What a great composition! You focused on the composition as you described in your comment and it sounds great. I like it!

Melodic!

I think this song is great. Simply lovet it. The melody coming in 0:42 is very good. so you got a 10!:)

Planing on making it a full song as it breaks off at the end as you mentioned?

9thOracle responds:

Thanks! like I said I might or might not finish it. I want to though as to me it seems to be my best one so far.

Yeh.

Well I like the build up, the windy thing =). The beat, especially the hi-hat, doesn't sound that great to me. Everything sounds very artificial which is a bit annoying, hey, I know how it is=). What program do you use? I would really recommend getting some soundfonts, some real instruments. I did that myself recently, and wow awesome. Ok, I hope I this gives you some value. I haven't listened to your other stuff, so I can't compare. =)

thedude9 responds:

thanks for the review!

I use FL studio 9 (Aka fruityloops) for my music. I did have some thoughts about changing the hi-hats, ill admit to that.

-thedude9

p.s. don't listen to my other stuff please. this is my only good track :)

YES

I really like it. Awesome that you mention House. I'm a passionate House fan, and I understand why you got the images, I can imagine. like the cold mysterious melodies, you really got that feeling. Inspirational

MrKennedy123 responds:

Thanks! House is the greatest TV show ever concieved.

Nice beat

Wow this is really, really great! woooh

I think..

If you continue on this, it will be amazing. Yepp.
Synth 5/5
Melody 5/5 (simple, but)
Beat 4,5/5
Quality 5/5 (? haha)
Variation 3/5 (Will not be a problem when finished) =)
Haha, my amazing score system^^ lame:P

nice

I like it. I think techno + piano and strings is a very nice mix. My taste. so spot on there.
But. I would be a bit careful with the "loud" bass which begins at 0:35, it could have been better (or different), I would use the intro bass more, and loud bass less. More exactly use the loud one when the other sounds surrounds it sort of. You understand what I mean? The bass sound a bit off sometimes in the most silent parts. But don't believe I disliked it. I actually liked it. I just wanted to tell you my tiny thought about this detail.
Great techno song. The synth melody is perfect.
One last thing. The kick sound, I don't know if my speakers is bad enough but I think it could have been a bit stronger/harder. Just a bit. Anyway, that's just my opinion in conflict with my taste! Btw, I see you've got more skills than me, so I wont say too much=)

OK, keep up. I going to review more songs soon.

yaas!

This is my favorite song from you=) I like the melodies, very catchy!! Very nice. The different kind of sounds and melodies is very clear and energizing. You used the sounds perfectly right, imo. Inspirational!

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